2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；请注意分段。

Just as a saying goes: a strong will is a permission of success . A strong will man who can come true his dream or finish great mission whenever.Beethoven created symphony destiny after he couldn't hear,shitiesheng wrote ditan and I after his legs were cut off,goujian won the war after ten yeas poor life of as a slave in wu danisty . All of them stood up again and again in lost. they believed themselves with a strong will.As we students who are the future of our country. Faced with stress and difficulties ,we should go ahead with a strong will . Only in this way can we become an useful man!