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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17420
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分89.0分
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用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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It is believed that the computer can do almost every thing. At the time the computer was invented, scientists, carried away by its speed of calculating, felt that they had created an amazing miracle. It was gradually used not only in mathematics, physics,chemistry and astronomy,but in places like the library,hospital,military army and so on,replacing the work of man. For this reason, the computer was entitled “Electronic Brain” in terms of appreciation. Can man be controlled by computers? The answer to this question is negative. Although a computer works much faster and accurately than humans,there is a fact that we can't deny: it is designed, manufactured and programmed by human beings. Of course, some science fictions have made up many fascinating stories about computers, or rather robot, who conquers man and the earth, even the whole universe; however, they are only existing in our imagination up to now. A horse helps man a lot runs much faster than we, but after all, it is only a slave. We can surely say that computers will still be very promising in the future. With the help of it, we can do what could not be done before easier. Conquering the universe, discovering new things, explaining mysterious phenomena puzzling us at present are all made possible by computer.

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