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As far as I'm concerned,English is the most important course in all of our courses ,which can help us delelop ourselves in other countries.However,I found that many students in our class lose heart in learning English,but it doesn't matter . Here are steps can develop your interests in learning English.The first,you can lisening some English music when you have spare time , and you can sing with the singer,which can develop your interests.And then,you have to read English aloud every morning ,if you keep it up ,your English will get great progress before you knew it. The last,you should do English homework seriously that is the most important . If you do what I says ,your English will get a great prograss ,Blieve youself !