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文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉。
Mr.Wang, I am writing to tell you that I appreciate extremely you for have supplied an opportunity as an editor in our magazine two months ago.During these days,I learned a lot of knowledge from our colleagues who have always teached me enthusiastically without reservation. Although I am very like our magazine,I tend to quit in that the circumstance is not what I expected.The genuine reason is not only the high wages can I not get, but also we cannot get more chances of promotion than our counterpart.Consequently,I decide to resign from our magazine. I am apologizing sincerely for this issue. Yours cordially Li Ming
