内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com From:hubin@163.com Dear kpoh, I'm interested on your new product of #5670 by learned from the exhibition was held in New Year between December 15th to 22th.Please help to send us your price list and instruction. Thank you very much for your cooperation, hope we can establish business relationship. Best Regards Mr HU