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字数：300 满分：100分
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意。
Saving money, we still can be a smart customer I do think using coupons or joinning group-buy deals or other ways to reduce the costs is an important part of our shopping life . On the one hand ,we are students , a group has a little or no income ,we have to be careful with our money in our daily life . On the other hand , crazy on saving money do not means we will ignored the quantity ,the type or something else.For example ,i would like to buy something i do need or like and then i just wait for it's on sales day or jiont a group-buy dealer and take it. In a world , do ignored the words like "crazy in a on sales day makes you look like a silly customer, just elect the good you like on the sales and saving your money.
