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The Dragon Boat Festival The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important nation festival of China.Every year , on the date of chinese lunar May five,people from all over the China will hold a series activities to celebarate the Dragon Boat Festival. Acording to the lengend, at ancient minister jump in to GuLuo River to warn the emperor to govern the country and do not ruin it.To save QuYuan, people take the boat to refloat his body and throw out Zhongzi into the GuLuo River in order to aviod the fish eat QuYuan's body. To commerate this great man, this day become a traditional day. After thousand yeas, gragon boat competition become a fixed activity and Zhongzi become the mark food af the Gragon Boat Festival. Up to now,the Gragon Boat Festival is not only a date for commeration , but alsoan important part of chinese culiture.
