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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Adverstising is one of the most important marketing tool in our lives. I think that it tries to make us to buy the advertised products, but I do believe that our needs still play the most important role. There are a lot of advertisements in our daily lives. For example, we see pop-up advertising windows when browsing the Internet and we get information from the promotional flyers and classified advertisements from the newspaper. But when it comes to buying, many of us have to take the necessecity and price into consideration. Also, false advertisements provide us with a lot of misleading information and they gradually reduce customer royalty. This means that we develop the habit of making better choices. However, advertisements sometimes do discourage people from being different and buy the same things. Especially for teenagers who are easily swayed by advertising. They like following the trend and making the choices like their peers. Similarly, celebrities also influence consumers' decision-making process. These consumers buy things for the reputation of the celebrity instead of the products themselves. In conclusion,advertisements influence people's choices to buy the same products, but people have started to develop the habit of telling the difference between the advertisements and the reality. They can make better choices for what they truly need.
