2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If I have a foreign friend that she is going to visit my hometown.I want to show her visit the Great Wall .The first reason,the Great Wall is famous of the world,it is have a long distance which that you can see the Beijing a part of the view. And the second,If you stand the there ,you can enjoying the there,because you can felt it is great project from the human-being wisdom.That's our pround of it .