英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写电邮

作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段。

From: Tomsmith@hotmail.com Date:June 10 To:John@163.com Subject:To establish business relationship Dear John, I'm Tom Smith, the sales manager from Fox Electronic Company, I have some insure need to negotiate with you face to face, it's about the advertising campaign of the lauch date for our new product , Are you avalible on June 20th ? Your early reply would be appreciated. I hope we can establish cooperation relationship. Your sincerely Tom Smith