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For some people being a great leader in a big company or even in the government of his country is their whole life dream. Then a question about how to be a good or professional leader came into their mind.The frist answer must be the leadership. Yes leadership is almost the only reason that why someone can be a successful leader ,while someone can not,even give him a chance to be a leader he will still become an ordernary person at last. why? does that means talented people’s leadership is inborn? No I don't agree with it From my point of view this is just a kind of bility that we can learn.
