2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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Mary,a foreign friend of mine,who comes from Australia,is coming to visit my hometown.Therefore,I am ready to take her to the Lovers Road in Zhuhai. The Lovers Road,28km length,is one of the famous sight spot of Zhuhai.And the Zhuhai Fishing Girl,which is located at the Lovers Road,signified sweetness and loyalty.Morever,there is a beach along the road,we can enjoy the sunshine and cool water there.Besides that,we can rent two bikes to go biking with singing and laughing in the evening.For more enjoyable,we could taste the delicious seafood and join the party at night,enthusiastic and positive can we feel deeply. Finally,I sincerely hope my dear friend could have an unforgettable day!