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My view on online shopping Nowadays,online shopping has become a fashionable trend in our life.Then,why do people like online shopping? One of the reasons is that it brings people convinience.People don't have to waste a lot of time and energy to going from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.The commodities people order will be delivered to them promptly.Moreover,in most case,the items are cheaper than shop on the conventional store,which attract to most people. However,shop on the internet also has it's disadvantege.On the one hand,the customer can't see the good and try it personally,the commodity people received is not the same as look on the computer.On the another hand,some shop on the internet are not regiester,they will never deliverd anything to you after they get the money from you. It's undenable that shop on the internet has become irresisted trend in our modern life.It's of great urgenly that the rapid of build a laws in accordance to protect online shopping.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convinient of online shopping, which we don't worried about being cheated.
