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新东方托福高分作文:选择慢节奏生活还是快节奏生活?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:50浏览次数:5828
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题目要求:

Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目分析:

两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是,不慌不忙(with full composure),却很有效率(efficient)。所以,我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外,也要看是什么样的事情,工作、学习,都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible),但是与朋友消遣,与家人相伴,却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up),而应该at a slower place。
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文中学术词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;句式变化多样;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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when it comes to the discussion which living in a fast pace or the slow, in my opinion, its best to live in own pace depend on the time, we have to do our works very quickly, and the same time, we still are allowed to stay with our parents by spending some times, so the fast or the slow pace are limited. the Sachier, one of famous present in UK, she made many things, such as, 19 century war with Agngtin, rebuilding the state. She always did some thing in time and very fast, her life is fast enough. However, she ignorant her family, her husband, her children disagree with her stuff, they think she didn't be a good mother or good wife to the family. Beacuse she was so hurry that cant take care her family. In this way, people should find a balance in their life. Amma,one of My friends, she is very smart, she like math and literature. but she often think its best to make herself rest and happy, she don't care the home works, she spend many time on watching TV. So she started to give up her study and stay at home every day, it makes her parents very angrily. One day, I called her, I would meet her for a important thing, she saied ok, but I finally waited her just two hours in a rainy day. I worry about her. Life is not straight, people should live for the moment. Believe it s will be colorful in your whole life.

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