高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My Hometown My hometown is based in a small village of Yuncheng county,Shandong province.in the past,my hometown have many trees ,and the water of river is very clear.you can see the fished swimed in it happily.But the room is simple,the street is narrow.The peope worked hard in farm.so they are poor.Now the high building instead of the simple room,all kinds of cars in the roomy street,but the industries' development lead to the bad enviroment,as the trees ruduce and the fished disappear,now thinking of good measures to deal with the pollution is more important