作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇表达不够丰富,学术词汇方面要多累积;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
David: Hello,David!I hear you are going to come to china in soon,I'm very happy. Chinese is a very difficult languagh,If you want to study it well,you can accept my idea. First,you can't scared for saying Chinese,you should speak and practice very often,and why you don't make a lot of friends that he is from China?It's helpful and easy. Second,you can watch a lot of Chinese film,your Chinese will better. All above it,that is you should speak more, listen more,touch more.