- 分享到:
学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
In the dense dark, there is a lamp with happy flame which flares up despite the ruthless dark and loneliness. Because it delivers the love which light up the darkest corner and warm others around. The flame in the picture stands for the love in everyone’s heart. And this precious virtue should be extended to others, sharing our kindness and love with others. Actually the practice is simple, such as helping the old cross the street as well as guiding tourist to the destination ect.. Moreover, it is surprising to find the feedback from others at the moment we start to do this, which like a Domino effect, recycling and evolving, and the outcome will be enormous. Thus, that effect will be a thrust to construct a well correlated and harmonious society. A case in point is Kim Yuna, a famous athlete from Korea, who has donated a big fortune to Indonesia after the tsunami. As to the victims, that will be a warm hand helping them to weather the adversity. At last, as a youngster, there is a lot we can do, but what suspends at the top of the list is rather straight forward. Like the proverb goes “charity begins at home”. We can be more considerate to family member and friends. We believe that the glimmer of humanity and love will never be extinguished, instead, the glow will reach every corner of the world.
