请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误,尤其加强学术词汇的使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;采用了一些简单的从句。
David: Hello,David!I hear you are coming to china afterward,I'm extrmely happy. Chinese is a very difficult language,if you want to study it well,you can accept my ideas. First,you can't scared for saying Chinese,you should speak and practice very often.You can say Chinese loudly when you get uo in the morning. Second,why you don't make a lot of friends that he is from China?It's much helpful, and study it easilier. Third,you can watch a lot of Chinese film,and you can buy a MP3 to listen the Chinese songs,your Chinese will better. All above it,that is you should speak more, listen more,touch more.