文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
David: Hello,David!I hear you are coming to china afterward,I'm extremely happy. Chinese is a very difficult language,if you want to study it well,you can accept my ideas. First,you can't be scared for saying Chinese,you should speak and practice very often.You can speak Chinese every morning. Second,why you don't make a lot of friends that he is from China?It's much helpful, and study it easier. Third,you can watch a lot of Chinese movies,and you can buy a MP3 to listen the Chinese songs,your Chinese will better. All above it,that is you should speak more, listen more,touch more.