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雅思TASK2大作文模拟题:审查制度 Censorship

发布时间:2013-07-16 16:59浏览次数:3479
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Some parents believe that there is no harm in allowing their children to watch TV programmes and movies that contain a lot of violence. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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When children spare their leisurer time by watching the TV shows and movies which includes violent stories,will they be affected and become a bad man such as a murder,a burglar several years late?Some parents do not think so. The opinion to support their thought,I think,is from our memory of our childhood. When we were still kids and adolescents,the entertainmments we could join in were full of violence virtually.There were a lot of stories refer to some evil in the weighty literatures we read and there were killing,deaths in our national movies which consist of mainstream propaganda.Whereas we are now normal people leading a normal life. What I am caring about is the problem that we have not teach our children how to face with the violence and other bad things such as drugs,sex correctly.The violence is not horrific,the things that terrify us is the wrong way to face them.

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