2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

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A few days ago,it is a rainning morning.I was waiting a bus at the bus station.Suddenly,a old woman was knocked down by a young boy who was running after the bus.The boy didn't stop to help the old woman but just went away!The old woman sat here as if she leg hurt.I ran to her at once.So did a other boy.We helped the old woman together.