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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8994[网页划词已开启]
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

When it comes to the empression of somebody,appearance is almost the first aspect eo judge.And most people think of person by the first looking.But in my opinion,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.It is stupid of people to follow the action. There are a lot of reasons about it.The first one reason is that the most valuable thing is a person's inner world.If the person is honest ,kind-hearted and competent,what would you do if the person is ugly?On the other hand,many people disguise their true appearance or feelings for pretending they are better.Last but not least,Judging a person needs to know more about hin or her.and making a correct choice. Many people should choose a wise way over a single way to judge a person.If you do this,you will find more ture friends correctly no matter how appearance they have.

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