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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8980
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

When it comes to the impression of somebody,appearance is almost the first aspect eo judge.And most people think of person by the first meeting.But in my opinion,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.It is stupid people to follow the action. There are a lot of reasons about it.The first one reason is that the most valuable thing is a person's inner world.If the person is honest,kind-hearted and competent,what would you do if the person is ugly?On the other hand,many people disguise their true appearance or feelings for pretending they are better.Last but not least,Judging a person needs to know more about hin or her,and making a correct choice. Many people should choose a wise way over a single way to judge a person.If you do this,you will find more true friends correctly no matter how appearance they have.

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