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Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution? With the increasement of private cars, environment is getting worse.It is high time to take measures to control the amount of private cars and pollution tax seems like an effective way. Firstly,most private car owners are middle income group and they have to be care of their moneys so that they have to take pollution tax as an great factor when they buy cars. Secondly,pollution tax could be a great way to warn people to protect environment. in the other hand,pollution tax will collect a great bill of money which we could make it on environment protecting programs. In a word,private car owners shuld be taxed for pollution because they should pay for the pollution they make.
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