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能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
Dear library adminstrator: I am a undergraduate of this university, and I like to read diverse books in the library.The Library is the best place to study. But I think the service of library has many aspects to improve. First,the seats of library is too little so as to many people can't find a seat to sit and read comfortably.Second, I advise that the library should introduce many books about history,literature,philosophy other than the teaching books and instrumental books.More importantly, the library should forbid the students bringing food into library, because that is very harmful to the environment of reading. Thanks you for reading my letter and I will appreciate your effort to improve the services of library.