字数:200满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
Dear library administrator: I am an undergraduate of this university, and I like to read diverse books in the library.The Library is the best place to study. But I think the service of library has many aspects to improve. First,the seats of library is too little so that many people can't find a seat to sit and read comfortably.Second, I advise that the library should introduce many books about history,literature,philosophy other than the teaching books and reference books.More importantly, the library should forbid the students from bringing food into library, because that is very harmful to the environment of reading. Thanks you for reading my letter and I will appreciate your effort to improve the services of library.