字数:200满分:100分
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
Dear library administrator: I am a university undergraduate, and I like to read diverse books in the library.The Library is the best place to study. But I think the service of library has many aspects to improve. First,the seats of library is too little so that many people can't find a seat to sit and read comfortably.Second, I advise that the library should introduce many books about history,literature,philosophy other than the teaching books and reference books.More importantly, the library should forbid the students from bringing food into library, because that is very harmful to the environment of reading. Thanks you for reading my letter and I will appreciate your effort to improve the services of library.