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2012年6月9日雅思大作文真题:新闻与人们生活的关系

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:51浏览次数:2684
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【题目要求

Some people think news is in no connection with people's lives, therefore, it is a complete waste of time to read the news in the newspaper or watch TV news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目翻译】

有些人认为新闻跟人们的生活关系不大,因此,读报纸或看电视新闻完全是浪费时间。

你在多大程度上同意或不同意这一观点?

【题目关键词】

1-news

2-in no connection with

3-a complete waste of time

4-read the news in the newspaper

5-watch TV news

【写作小贴士】

此类题目是典型的argumentative essay/report,可以遵照双边类文章的写作模式,也可以按单边类方法写作,建议单边写作,现从read news in the newspaper和watch TV news好的角度着手,首先,Reading news in the newspaper or watching TV news give families something to bond over. Both newspaper and television have led to some great conversations. Often, talking about something that occurred in a newspaper or TV show will lead to discussions of real life situations. If this is not a benefit, I do not know what is 。其次,News in the newspaper or TV news are both educational and in formative. News can be as educational as going to school。最后,We can learn about different people and places. Newspaper or TV news opens up the world, whether through watching TV news or newspaper news with multicultural characters!

【写作语汇一览表】

1-inculcate a great habit like reading in someone

2-become a passion for someone

3-one’s perseverance of this trend

4-the mounting pressure of work

5-keep someone engrossed

6-introduce someone to the different cultures around the globe

7-give you a glimpse into other cultures and places of the world

8-reduce boredom

9-break the monotony of a lazy, uncreative and boring life

10-explore a new world filled with information and ingenuity

11-make your vision blurry

12-for a wide variety of reasons

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章词汇丰富度较好,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

There is so much news surrounding us in the modern society that we can not get rid of it virtually,and this raises the question whether the news we get from the TV reports or newspaper is valid to our lives or not. In my mind,I agree with the idea that it is beneficial to people to aquire the news throughout the weekdays and weekends.First of all,wathcing TV together is a way to get along with families.The members have no chance to communicate for more than one words because everyone has to adjust to the surroundings due to the quick changes under civilisation,whereas they could stay together and even debate with each other when they watch the TV. The next opinion is that we can get some useful messeges from the newsletter, especially for the shareholders,dealers and other businessmen,and we can know what exactly the world is,which place has the most beautiful landscape for travel or where to invest.It can increase the level of our living quality and accelerate the development of the national economy.

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