2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I want to introduce my hometown to you . my hometown is very beautiful . his name is Yangling . In my opinion , Yangling is like a strong man , every place is full of the force .He has many beautiful place to visit .For example , there is