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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dream, a word we often say, but what is the real dream? No one can give a precise definition. People's views on dream vary from person to person. The two articles in Part Two introduce American dream and Chinese dream. To a certain extent, the dreams have something in common. The final purpose of both American dream and Chinese dream is to pursue a better life. But from another point of view, there is essential difference between American dream and Chinese dream. American people pay more attention to personal happiness, however, Chinese dream tends to collectivism. Chinese dream is special, it contains a lot of things, more complex and not a word can say. It belongs to every Chinese people. In my personal idea, everyone has his or hers dreams, so does the contrary. Dream is sweet, attractive and there is no limit to a dream for anybody. I believe one can live better with dreams in heart. Within dreams, contrary and people can be better. When I meet challenges while pursuing my dream, I will face the challenge actively, just because I like to stimulate. As a beautiful sentence said, your dreams will always defeat reality, if you give it a chance. So, heartily do your dreams!
