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Everyone has various opinions on what you will do to make your life more meaningful.Someone maybe think that it is meaning that they maintain happy every day. Someone maybe think that it is meaning that do a lot of things to fill with diligent As far as I am concerned, I think a meaning life is that you have a goal and try your best to achieve it. Nothing can be happier than achieve success,I have a deep impression, so if we pay efforts for our goal . when I was a middle school student ,I have a poor grade and I was very sad at that time. But my father told me that you should set up a comfortable goal and study hard. If you insist on it, you would be successful. From then on, I still insist the way to realize my dream. At the same time , I get happy. In one word, I deem the way of life is very meaning. I believe that I can know more meaning thing in term of that life.
