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新东方托福高分作文:电影:严肃还是娱乐?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:44浏览次数:562
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题目要求:

Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目分析:

分两个段落讨论两种电影,说明这两种电影都有他们的价值,都值得观赏。最后一段说在不同的心情下,有着不同的选择。

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评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;熟练使用了一些长难句;文中词汇使用灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇。

用户练习作文:

In such an intensely competitive world, movies are combined with abundant commercial elements to catch our eyes, focusing more on the funny things to calm down the fast lane style. Nevertheless, I am still absorbed in serious types of movie. The first reason of the affection for the serious films is the personal taste for loving the abstruse things which forces me thinking. I don't want to waste time on the films like fastfood with the fuction for fun and none meaningful thing to remind. Such films don't need to review and you just forget them after watching. I could watch the movie "the 1900" for several times to understand the director's philosophy and comprehension of the life, which enlighten me the approaching road in the future, there not existing in fast movies. Becides, what's attracting me most is the value of the film, that is to say, a serious movie is much more valuable than the amusing movie to me. The principle rule is that I will spend limited money in seeing a serious movie rather than the funny one, as a result from the established quantity of the money. According to the economic theory, one will purchase more valuable things to satisfy himself and to attain the best utility, which accounts for my preference for the serious movie. What's more, it's suseptible for the serious movie compared with other commercial movies to equip higher quality in the contents, staff, actions, background music and extra movie factors. A profound film appeal more notable movie stars and more efforts the director as well as others devote, not only the need, but also the chance for the artists to prove themselves and to create a beautiful working bearing in the river of the history. Maybe there seems to be else causes to testify my preference for the earnest film, however, good movies alse contain the interesting spots to delight us.

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