2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

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As is shown above, we can see two people each charting in the picture. A father and his daughter. The dad ask his girl "how was school today".The girl answered" you can read all about it on my blog".It is obvious that her father was so wondered by her reply. Nowadays, the rise in the phenomenon of the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication has public concern. Some people think that it changes our life-style and offer many convienents. For example, the ways of communication can make us recognizing each other and nee not to face to face. By the constray, the others people think that the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication is harmful more than benefits. It can change more and more strange, and no feel to our family. In my opinion, we should keep clear mind when we deal with those new teachology.