2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在学术词汇方面希望能更熟练一些文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

As is shown above, we can see two people each charting in the picture. A father and his daughter. The dad ask his girl "how was school today".The girl answered" you can read all about it on my blog".It is obvious that her father was so wondered by her reply. Nowadays, the rise in the phenomenon of the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication has public concern. Some people think that it changes our life-style and offer many convienents. For example, the ways of communication can make us recognizing each other and nee not to face to face. On the contrary, the others claim that the way is harmful more than benefits. It can change more and more strange, and no feel to our family. In my opinion, we should keep clear mind when we deal with those new teachology.