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Dear Tom,I am so happy that you will visit my hometown,then,I will make a schedule to take you hung out with me. First I want to introduce my hometown to you.To be frank,there is long history for my hometown Beijing.Therefore you can find many beautiful things in here,like Great wall,Palace , that I must take you visit ,that is the one of feature in China.In briefs,if you come here,you must be love here.What's more,my hometown have many delicious food,we can taste more than eight diverse food,such as hot pot in Sichuan,sweet food in Zhengjiang and Beijing duck.Generoully speaking,there not only can see much beautiful place but also eating much delicious food. As far as I am concerned,the reasons is that the feature of China and tasty food can expressed how beautiful in China ,and it can strongly to represent our country's history.In the last I want you have good time in here,I can't help meeting you now.
