小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.Her name is Lili.She has long hair.She like plays basketball and singing.I like her because she is a beautiful girl.Always she will give me some good things to eat.My good friend has a beautiful book.I like it too.She is a nice girl because she often help us.