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Should College Student Hire Cleaners? Should college student hire cleaners?In my opinion,i certainly disapprove such behavours. First of all,as a college student,it is our duty to do the cleans.That is too shameful to hire a cleaner to help with the chores.On the other hand,we are not that rich to hire a cleaner.