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The table contains information about the different ethnic groups making up the population of Atlantis City over two decades. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table above contains the information of the population of the Atlantis City in two decades from 1988 to 2008 which reflects the total population has increased largely and we can acquire at least two takeaways from it by comparing the different years and different ethnic groups. On the one hand,Atlansis City see the number of the monority groups has enlarged over the 20 years while the Caucasian namely white people in general faces a rapid decline in population. On the other hand,we can point out that Caucasion still maintains the largest scale of the population though it encounters the gradual incline of other groups.However,I think the Caucasian group will be a monority group in next two decades depending on the trend we can see.
