高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；连词使用偏少。

My hometown My hometown is small countryside, it have the Luoma lake and the beijing-hangzhou grand canal, and it around my hometown. In the past,there have a lot of trees around it , and some kinds of fish to play in fresh river water . we lived in shabby houses and narrow street, people lived a poor life. In the present, there are many tall buildings and factories in my hometown. kinds of car is busy to run in the street. however,because industry quickly develop.the environment get bad and the trees reduce and fish disappeared. it is the urgent thing to solve the pollution.