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It is not so difficult In my class, many of my classmate live in school, and it is not convenient for them to buy what they want, such as, fruits, clothes and so on. Li Ying is a day-student, he always offers to help those resident student to buy things out of school. And he even buy fruit for one of my classmates but does not ask for money, becuase his family is impoverished. If he did not tell us the fact we will not know that Li Ying was so warm heated and helpful. Many students think it is troublesome to help others, so they are loth to offer their hands. Buying things for others is troublesome in some extent. Maybe it will take you a little time or you have to meet some unexpected situation such as the things you buy do not satisfy your classmates. But Li Ying is in complete contemp of these quibbles. He is very glad to help others, which win respects and good reputation for him. Help others is a good merit which should be promoted. One can not totally independent in social life. You have to connect with others, such as relatives, collegues, friends and so on. One will not be suitable to the society if he or she cut off the connection with the outside. Can you be so sure that you can haddle everything without help of other's? Though you may ask help from others, you should offer your hands without hesitate if you can do it. It is a goes saying that" Those who love others permanently will be loved by others for ever". So it is not difficult to help others. You will gain good returns soon or later.
