【题目要求】
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
【题目分析】
同意这个观点比较容易写。成年人也有娱乐的需求,从繁重的压力中解脱出来(escape),游戏对老年人更是如此。从游戏中可以学到很多东西(桥牌——团队精神;围棋、象棋——拓展智力)作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。
The Meaning of Games In the modern world,with the rapid development of technology,on the one hand our life become more convenient and more comfortable.Otherwise,on the other hand,our work environment become more competitive and more stressful.Hence as adults also need some leisure time to entertain and escape from the pressure. From my point of view,I believe that everyone should learn to balance his or her life no matter about the age.As children,they can improve themselves several skills by playing games with others such as the sense of cooperation,social skills and intelligent.Then for adults it is necessary to enjoy themselves' life sometime like some parties especially when they feel stressful.What's more,play games such as chess or bridge poker would bring lots of merits to old people. Above all mentioned,I hold that games are as important for adults as they are for children.
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