2012年7月7日雅思大作文真题:广告对消费者的影响

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Advertising is a very important marketing tool today. I think that advertising boosts the the sales of the advertised products instead of the quality, but I believe that the most of the consumers still make their own choices. Advertising is an integral part of our lives. For example, it informs us about new products or services and it helps consumers better understand the advertised products. This means we can get more access to things we would like to buy and we can be clear about whether we need the products. Advertising is also creative and entertaining. It encourages people to associate the advertised products with attractive livestyles, which makes people aware of the lastest trend. In this way, it brodens our horizon. However, there are many deceptive advertisements that only focus on the quantity instead of the quality. Some promotional flyers aimed at the patients are of the most disgusting. They use the patients' disease to make profit. Similarly, the advertisements aimed at teenage also use stars to pursuade them to buy things they don't need. The goverment may regulate this kind of advertising. In conclusion, advertisments do have drawbacks, but I think it's valuable.