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I’m glad that you had a nice birthday party last week. I often celebrate my birthday with my parents. Because I think it’s difficult for my parents to make me grow up. They make me feel the true love. I also think that the birthday is a time to thanksgiving parents. I often eat cakes on my birthday and make wish. Every year I wished that my parents will be heath in the future. I also receive the presents from my parents and friends. My favorite present is given by my father. It’s a watch. When my father gave me this watch. He said: “When you see this watch, you will miss me.” was moved to tears. Because it’s symbol of his love. Nowadays, this watch is on my left hand. It’s very heavy. But it is my father’s love I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
