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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
I’m glad to hear from you. My favorite teacher is my English teacher. Because she sense of responsibility. She has short blonde curly hair and wear glasses. Some of my classmates say that she never wears the same clothes. As we know, she has lots of clothes. My English is not very well. One day she called me to go to her office. She gave me my examination paper. She said: “Prepare for this exam again, I will check tomorrow.” Next day I came to her office. She began to dictation. There were many words on the paper, but she was very patient. Every words was very clearly. After the dictation. She told me how to learn the English and encourage me. She really responsible for the teaching. Who is your favorite teacher? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
