Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Nowdays,eduction pays is very high earning.It's a importion question.Why?Because many parents hope they children have a good work and happness life.we see a ghapy.Data are for person age 25 and over.It's not very young.Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.Less than high school diploma have to pay 451 dollars.High school diploma have to pay 638 dollars.Some college,no degree hvae to pay 719 dollars.