2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,I will take him to see the Island of fang ji.It is a builtiful pleace,who has the blue sky and water.You can swimming in the sea,and eat the fuilt on the beach. And than,I will take him to my hometow to eat my special food.like,zongzi,noodll and gaodian.On the night,I will going to big pleace with him to look the dance of chinese'dama.