2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；简单的使用了一些复杂句，但从句使用不充分；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

According to the survey in Bureau of Labor Statistics we can easily find that the high education a person get the lower unemployment rate he or she will get. never can we ignore the fact that higher education arms us more ability to supply a satisfied job in the society. Without doubts it will cast more money as well as energy in study in school