2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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According to the diagram,we clearly learn that education pays in higher earning and lower unemployment rates.As early as education pay in lower earning and high unemployment.Then education pays medium earning and medium unempioyment. There are many reasons accouting for this matter.Firstly,if you want to have a good job,you should have a high degree.secondly,competition is very violent in socity.You must improve your degree.finally,the parents hope their children have a great life.So, we should to learning for long time. As far as I am concerned,we should studies and get high degree.