小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；从句不足，简单句比重高；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

My new teacher is a young lady. She often tells us that no pain, no gain. she made something very serious and hardworking. She also helps us solve diffcult problems. We all like her very much because she is helpful teacher. I often made mistake in my class ,but my new teacher always forgive me and guide me to repentance. my new teacher also have a beautiful face and charming voice. In a word, she is very welcome in my class.