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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33642
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了。

用户练习作文:

How to be a rational customer Nowadays, more and more people are careful with their money in the daily life. most of us want to be smart consumers by collecting various of coupons, buying clothes in a sale, and so on. As far as i am concerned, a real smart consumer should be a man who knows how to use their money to make their life more happy and enjoy their life. As a smart consumer, we should not pay more attention to money, instead the value brought by money, and let money create big profits for us. If it can give us happiness, i think, we should spend money on that, and enjoy our daily life. on the other hand, we should have our own ideas and learn to be a independent person. Group-buying of course can help us save much money, sometimes it may be good for us ,however, it might not suit for you, even though it is a good stuff. therefore, do not follow other's steps and learn to be a thoughtful man. In a word, to be a rational person , not only do we need the good qualities such as be independent, be thoughtful, also we should learn to make a wise decision.

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