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How to be a rational customer Nowadays, more and more people are careful with their money in the daily life. most of us want to be smart consumers by collecting various of coupons, buying clothes in a sale, and so on. As far as i am concerned, a real smart consumer should be a man who knows how to use their money to make their life more happy and enjoy their life. As a smart consumer, we should not pay more attention to money, instead the value brought by money, and let money create big profits for us. If it can give us happiness, i think, we should spend money on that, and enjoy our daily life. on the other hand, we should have our own ideas and learn to be a independent person. Group-buying of course can help us save much money, sometimes it may be good for us ,however, it might not suit for you, even though it is a good stuff. therefore, do not follow other's steps and learn to be a thoughtful man. In a word, to be a rational person , not only do we need the good qualities such as be independent, be thoughtful, also we should learn to make a wise decision.